Audience Focus group Feedback

WWW:

• good overall idea about the kind of production you want to do 
• good explanation on the audience group you production is aimed at 
• fluent in presenting our ideas

EBI:

• Decide on the scene(s) to show in the production 
• Be more specific on when you are going to use the flash back in the production and also a flash back of what e.g him getting jumped 
• Come up with a suitable name for your production
• Come up with scheduling details e.g when your group is going to decide a day dedicated to shooting the scenes.