Teacher Evaluation/Feedback for Prelimary exercise

WWW: 

• The uses of the over the shoulder shots. 
• The low angle shot of Alieu 
• The simple dialogue used.
• Excellent opening- the establishing shot of Alieu entering the room 
• The use of silence
• Effective match on action
• Lastly realistic performances 

EBI: 

• Must post the video up on the blog 
• Editing gone wrong- same line said twice
• Out of focus shots
• The teacher in the room affection of detail

score

- Creativity: 3/5
- use of technology: 2/5
- production process: 2/5
- codes and conventions: 3/5 
- fit for purpose:3/5
- attention to detail: 2/5 

Total score: 15/30